Renderotica

Posting a group of images that tell a story should be something to celebrate

As you progress you'll learn how to better your work each time you post something new.

But you should have some sort of post work tool like Gimp.  Post working allows one to fix minor flaws as no program can kick out mistake free renders.  A smoothing tool or even the ability to copy and past a small segment will only help improve your images.

two points I'll point out to you.

render 1 and 2  just behind the shoulder is a poke through.  this is where the shirt dod not conform to the muscular morphs you used. A smoothing tool in post work would have allowed you to remove the slight defect

Render 4  it's obvious Vinnie is wearing a sweater,  but the penis looks like it tore a hole through the sweater as there is material under the penis   Once again a smoothing tool used on the penis texture moving backwards to the jeans texture would have eliminated the small problem.  

Please accept this as constructive critism.. from one series artist to another.

Good luck on future rendering

regards  Shadoman

You have to remember that clothing mesh props are constructed using what are called bones.  The higher number of bones the better the prop will conform and bend,  but more bones mean a more complex prop to make.  Even with a prop that has a high decree of movement bone, they can only go so far. Highly muscular base figures may not allow a clothing prop to fit on them with full coverage.

A couple things you can do if allowed is to hide that part of the anatomy of your figure.

In poser the format I use, if I have a female wearing a sweater and because of the texture and morphs that came with her.  I might get poke throughs but if the clothing prop is a full turtle neck sweater I can go to the base figure mesh and hide her right and left collar, chest and abdomen sections of her body.and if needed even her forearms.  Now the lower arm elbow to wrist might be tricky to hide

The sweater will now look fine and if i want to increase the bust size I can,  but at some point, the mesh will begin to break up because the bones ere not designed to handle that much adjustment.like say increasing a bust size from a 36 C cup to a 54 DD

Check to see if DAZ figures and the program allow you to hide certain portions of a persons anatomy

Regards  Shadoman